Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Important scientific

research

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should be managed and controlled by

government

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instead

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of private companies, according to many people. I believe that private companies should be given freedom for

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research but

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research, but

with proper monitoring under

government

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of all, it is true that scientific

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should not be conducted only by

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government

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the government

because scientific

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is wide and

diverse so

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diverse, so

only

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can not find all the things which the private companies can do and they do

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more efficiently due to sustain their company.

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, Thomas Alva Edison was an individual inventor who has contributed to

whole world

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the whole world

by the finding of light bulb.

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, barring private companies from

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would slow down innovation and ultimately

progress

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the progress

of our country and

this

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may affect all people of

nation

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the nation

a nation

nations

.

On the other hand

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, if

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only in

hands

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the hands

of private organizations

then

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it could be harmful or detrimental for the country like

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of atomic or nuclear bomb should be conducted with more protection and need proper and sufficient management.

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, some private companies are profit oriented and they think only of their monetary gain. They must be controlled, as some of them might do it for destructive weapons which could threaten the whole world peace so,

this

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is the responsibility of

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to stop

this

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type of

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and monitor them. In conclusion, I would say that, private companies should allow for

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as it would help in progress of

country

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the country

a country

.

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, the

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must be reviewed and monitored by

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government

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the government

in order to prevent any misappropriation.