Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?

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programs
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budget
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in Indonesia, that represent the
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that used by
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to funding all programs in
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year. There are a
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of programs, in economic, sports, health,
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and humanities. All of these programs being funded by
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the state budget
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has their own post on that
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budget
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is important, but, the
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always has their priorities. In
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state
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program
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, some programs,
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, economics and
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have a majority proportion
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the government's budget
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. So in my opinion, I agree that
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must spend more money on medical care and
education
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. Medical care, like BPJS in Indonesia, is really important to keeping the citizen's health. Same as medical treatment,
education
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usually being preference too in our
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's
program
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. So, they usually put a
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of portion in the
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's
state
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.
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, in Indonesia,
education
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being
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of
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the program
a program
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of proportion in
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, the proportion is approximately 20% of
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, it's pretty much. In another way, we can't forget about other programs. Like building theatres and sports stadiums. These two timetables, usually, were not a priority for
government
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budget
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, but it is always having portions in
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state allocation
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the state allocation
state allocations
.
Government
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usually spends money on building theatres and a sports
stadium
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if there is a special agenda,
such
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as sport's calender, like ASEAN GAMES, SEA GAMES, or PON, or maybe more big event like Olympic. If there is a big calender that would
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hold
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country, like Olympic or ASEAN GAMES,
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government
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would spend a
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of sport
budget
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to prepare that event. In that case,
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government
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the government
, will build new
stadium
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and fix the old
stadium
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. These all
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stadium
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stadiums
will completed by the newest accommodations. At the end, we can say that
government
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usually has priority on spending their money. It's covered all of their programs, but they always have arrangement too. Usually, especially in Indonesia, medical care and
education
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will be prioritized so these two programs have the biggest portion too in
APBN
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. But, sports and art are important too, so
budget
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for building
stadium
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and theatres were important too, but not being prime concern.

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