Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Rober Smith and I am one
the
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member of your local community who lives in Lawrence Apartment
at
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floor 7. I am writing
this
letter regarding
to
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reconsider your decision of closing one and only
sport
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centre that we have at
young
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street. As you're aware of the fact that we are a community of over 10 thousand people and we only
this
community of our recreational and creative activities. I and my son always go for a walk in
morning
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time and
also
use a swimming pool to keep
ourselves
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fit. Most of the children are playing soccer, cricket
too
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every evening. Along with
this
these
place
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, organize many helpful seminars for children as well as for adults. If the centre will shut down,
then
local people definitely feel the left out as they don't have any near place where they can utilize their free time.
This
is not acceptable at all. If cutting the cost is the problem,
then
I am sure we can reconcile to other alternatives. Everyone from local communities
are
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against
this
decision. Please reconsider the decision of closing that centre. Yours Faithfully, Robert Smith
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