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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

#country #technology #skills #life
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These days, it has become a fashionable trend for a
country
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 trying to develop its
technology
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.
However
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, at the same time,
this
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 condition has changed and made several aspects
such
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 as ability as well as the
way
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 of life ignored by
society
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. Some argue that it will be useless to make it up or keep it sustains because
automatically
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automatic
technology
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 brings a lot changes to the
society
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. Personally, I strongly disagree that
technology
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 will bring negative impacts for a
country
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 when a
country
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 tries to adapt it. I will explain that in
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 essay according to my opinions and views. 
Firstly
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,
technology
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 takes a vaccinating role in the global
society
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, especially for a
country
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. A
country
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 that tries to adapt
technology
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 as the foundation of lifestyle indirectly traditional aspects will improve and a
country
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 will find a platform to promote their
culture
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 globally.
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, Japan as a
country
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 shows progressive development in
technology
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 by creating many variations of
technology
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. Japan still makes their
culture
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 known well by people around the world. At the same time, a lot of
findings
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the findings
 or creations were done by experts in
Japan but
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Japan, but
 traditional skills or the
way
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 of life still
remain
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remains
 same.
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,
technology
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 helps to promote cultural and traditional aspects
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of
 a
country
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. Today there are many countries tend to use
technology
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 to introduce their
culture
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 as well as their lifestyle in different parts of the world.
For instance
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 Indonesia, Ministry of Information and
Technology
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 succeed to promote
culture
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 and Indonesian lifestyle in
South East Asia region
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the South East Asia region
 during
SEA Olympiad
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the SEA Olympiad
 by using the internet and mobile television. Based on research by Indonesian media association 25,000 people reached because the
way
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 of advertising by using
technology
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. In conclusion, even though some people still believe that
technology
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 will change a lot of aspects of a
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country but
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country, but
 I believe that
technology
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 supports a
country
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’s development,
society
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 to be introduced, and make a
country
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 well known worldwide when a
country
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develop
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develops
technology
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 in the right
way
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Efficiency
  • Global connectivity
  • Cultural identity
  • Diversity
  • Innovation
  • Coexist
  • Sustainable
  • Eco-friendly
  • Energy-intensive
  • Practical skills
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Homogenize
  • Preservation
  • Global diversity
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