When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

These days, it has become a fashionable trend for a
country
trying to develop its
technology
.
However
, at the same time,
this
condition has changed and made several aspects
such
as ability as well as the
way
of life ignored by
society
. Some argue that it will be useless to make it up or keep it sustains because
automatically
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automatic
technology
brings a lot changes to the
society
. Personally, I strongly disagree that
technology
will bring negative impacts for a
country
when a
country
tries to adapt it. I will explain that in
this
essay according to my opinions and views. 
Firstly
,
technology
takes a vaccinating role in the global
society
, especially for a
country
. A
country
that tries to adapt
technology
as the foundation of lifestyle indirectly traditional aspects will improve and a
country
will find a platform to promote their
culture
globally.
For example
, Japan as a
country
shows progressive development in
technology
by creating many variations of
technology
. Japan still makes their
culture
known well by people around the world. At the same time, a lot of
findings
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the findings
or creations were done by experts in
Japan but
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Japan, but
traditional skills or the
way
of life still
remain
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remains
same.
Furthermore
,
technology
helps to promote cultural and traditional aspects
from
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of
a
country
. Today there are many countries tend to use
technology
to introduce their
culture
as well as their lifestyle in different parts of the world.
For instance
Indonesia, Ministry of Information and
Technology
succeed to promote
culture
and Indonesian lifestyle in
South East Asia region
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the South East Asia region
during
SEA Olympiad
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the SEA Olympiad
by using the internet and mobile television. Based on research by Indonesian media association 25,000 people reached because the
way
of advertising by using
technology
. In conclusion, even though some people still believe that
technology
will change a lot of aspects of a
country but
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country, but
I believe that
technology
supports a
country
’s development,
society
to be introduced, and make a
country
well known worldwide when a
country
develop
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develops
technology
in the right
way
.
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  • Technological advancement
  • Efficiency
  • Global connectivity
  • Cultural identity
  • Diversity
  • Innovation
  • Coexist
  • Sustainable
  • Eco-friendly
  • Energy-intensive
  • Practical skills
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Homogenize
  • Preservation
  • Global diversity
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