The graph below show how elderly people in Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.
The graph illustrates changes in
ways
old people in Europe spent their free time in a period of three decades from 1980 to the present.
In general, most Correct article usage
the ways
of
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apply
the
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apply
activities
have been increasingly popular with playing sport
being the top choice among elderly people in Europe Fix the agreement mistake
sports
for
most of the time.
In the 1980s, almost all Change preposition
apply
activities
were increasing in terms of popularity, with the exception of going to the theater
. Change the spelling
theatre
This
activity saw a decrease from 50% to 30%.
In the next
ten years, however
, reading dipped and hit a low in popularity, from 40% to only 20%. In contrast
, going to the theater
and other Change the spelling
theatre
activities
increased.
From 2000 onwards, nearly all activities
have been growing in popularity. Noticeably, hiking has overtaken playing sport
to become the most Fix the agreement mistake
sports
favored
choice with 80% of Change the spelling
favoured
the
people. The number of senior citizens who play Correct article usage
apply
sport
has been decreasing, Fix the agreement mistake
sports
although
it still comes second
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