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concern for the environment is growing and more and more people are choosing to recycle.But some people suggest that recycling is not enough.They believe we need to consume less.

#concern #environment #people
Over the time more and more people started to recycle in order to preserve and protect the environment together with his natural resources.
However some
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However, some
 people believe that we need to focus more on the amount of
waste
 we produce every day.
To begin
 with we have recycle bins everywhere with different colours for different products which they vary from paper to glass.
Moreover
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recycling helps reducing the volume of rubbish sent to landfill sites where the rubbish is buried in a way that it will be out of contact with the air.
Nevertheless
, some people think we need to pay more attention to the
waste
 that we are producing.
For instance
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supermarkets should stop using promotions that tempt us into buying more than we need. It's essential that the
waste
 is handled
,
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 stored
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 transported and disposed of properly. In conclusion, we should focus much more on the load of
waste
 we are producing than on the quantity of trash we are recycling.

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