Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Clothes
is
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are
the basic need of any
human but
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human, but
fashionable clothes is the need of the contemporary world. The
apperance
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
of the man defines his personality. People generally judge others by
thieir
of them or themselves
their
outfits. There are many people who wear fashionable clothes as they always want to follow the current trends. Some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that our clothes decide whether we are old fashioned or go with the trend. Whereas, others think that it is not appreciable to spend a lot of
money
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in buying fashionable clothes.
This
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essay
devels
turn up, loosen, or remove earth
delves
upon both the views. On the one hand, in the modern world, wearing trendy clothes is essential to maintain the standards and image among the people.
This
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type of
behaviour not
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behaviour, not
only boost the
confidence but
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confidence, but
also
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encourages the people to think about their health and wealth. As we all know,
first
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impression is the
last
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impression. So, people always try to be more
fashionale
being or in accordance with current social fashions
fashionable
in order to look different and stylish.
For instance
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, millions of people in India adore Priyanka Chopra and follow her clothing
stlyes
how something is done or how it happens
styles
.
On the other hand
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, some people think that
it
it is
it's
not
appreciable
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appreciably
to spend a lot of
money
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in fashionable clothes.
Such
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people believe that
money
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should be spent on the basic needs of the society and not on the fashionable clothes.
For example
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, Mahatma Gandhi, father of the nation, used to wear simple cotton clothes but still brought
magnificant
characterized by grandeur
magnificent
changes in the society. Not only
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money
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
people
also
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squander their time in markets for
shopping clothes
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clothes shopping
. In my opinion, it is the personal choice of an individual to decide what they have to wear. We need to maintain a balance among both the views.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • express individuality
  • boost confidence
  • self-esteem
  • social status
  • designer labels
  • cultural icons
  • art and creativity
  • financial strain
  • overspend
  • fast fashion
  • culture of waste
  • economic growth
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