Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

Well Nowadaya
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Well, nowadays
Well nowadays
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technology making
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technology, making
progrss
gradual improvement or growth or development
progress
universal.
in
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In
the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally
setsfite
filled with satisfaction
satisfied
for technology.
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refers to the speaker or writer
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agree
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
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has
more
papular
regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
popular
on the educational institution and university level.
secondly some
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people other believe that school
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the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
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computer education.
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Since
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a full supply
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teachers education in school and a lot of success skill and
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the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
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regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • progressively
  • substituted
  • prevalent
  • crucial
  • enhance
  • support
  • guidance
  • interaction
  • personal touch
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