The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offence
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of arrested people between genders by offence type in 2008.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of violence against people had the highest rate
in both genders, whereas
robbery was the least rate
.
Among men, 31% arrested
for violence against Add a missing verb
were arrested
the
person Correct article usage
a
and
was about Correct word choice
which
three-halves
times as high as the Correct your spelling
three halves
rate
of men committing theft and handling stolen goods. Crimes such
as criminal damage, drug offences or other offences among male
were 10%, 8%, Fix the agreement mistake
males
15
%, respectively- these figures are 2% higher than Correct word choice
and 15
female
for all three types of crime. The percentage of males arrested by robbery and burglary Fix the agreement mistake
females
were
twice as high as that of females.
In 2008/09, there were 3 types of crime that were more prevalent in females than in males Correct subject-verb agreement
was
such
as violence against the person; theft and handling stolen goods; fraud and forgery. Whereas
,
only approximately 2% of women were arrested for robbery, it was Remove the comma
apply
also
the lowest rate
among female offence groups.Submitted by alovelygirl54 on
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