The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates, how
much
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many
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the
Correct article usage
apply
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people travelled by train (National
rail
network, London underground, Light
rail
and metro system) in the UK from 1950 to 2004/5.
Overall
, the National
Rail
Network carried a higher
number
of passengers than the other two systems from the commencing with the
last
and the rate
was fluctuated
Change to the active voice
fluctuated
show examples
over the period.
However
, in 1950,
a
Correct article usage
the
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number
of passengers
of
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on
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National
Correct article usage
the National
show examples
rail
network were 1000
million
and,
therefore
, the
number
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
slightly increased and reach
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
peak
to
Change preposition
at
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around 1100
million
in 1960. After that sudden decrease was demonstrated with slight fluctuation and it declined to 700
million
during 1980.
Then
, the
number
was gradually risen
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gradually rose
has gradually risen
show examples
and in 2004/5
number
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the number
show examples
of travellers was
approximately
Replace the adverb
approximate
show examples
to
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apply
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900
million
.
Similarly
, the rate of tourists in the subway was 700
million
and it showed
the
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apply
show examples
leveled
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levelled
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off with some ups and downs till 1970 and
then
it decreased to 500
million
after one decade.
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Afterwards
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Afterward
Add a comma
,Afterward
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the rate
was
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apply
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sharply escalated to 800
million
during the 1990s which showed
similar
Add an article
the similar
a similar
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point
of
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to
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the 1st railway system
thereafter
after some fluctuation it reached the top point
at the end
of the period.
On the contrary
,
although
the light train and metro system was started
from
Change preposition
in
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1965 and only a few
million
people use it in the beginning, the
number
of passengers was rising over the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words rail, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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