More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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day
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the
trend
of purchasing well-known items is rapidly growing and being concerned
in
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with
society
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the society
.
This
state of affairs can be ascribed to a several reasons and I believe it is a welcome development. There are several
causes reasons
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causes, reasons
people prefer to buy luxury products
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Firstly
, nowadays many items
are made
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is made
with
limited number
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a limited number
so purchasing them can be seen a type of collecting
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from which they can enjoy the satisfaction and excited.
Secondly
, from buying the international brands bring them a superior quality goods than their national and along with
that is
a longer
warrant
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warranted
warrantee
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Finally
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,
this
is can be seen a way people can express their individuality and monetary
status encouraging
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status, encouraging
normal people to buy these expensive things feel confident
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This
trend
brings a lot of advantages to individuals and society
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The
first
reason is the trade between the nations if the particular brands are needed in any other
country
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country, then
then
it can result a
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it can result in a
good
relations
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relation
of two countries
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And the
second
a demand is higher and higher that companies will aim to introduce raise so many new factories or industry from there it will definitely give a boost to economy as well as the employment rate in that country. And the
last
profit in
this
phenomenon is make the personality improved and promote a positive lifestyle to suitable with a fashion brands are sworn. To inclusion ,
although
there are some a drawback views to
this
trend
but in my personality I assume the advantages of
this
trend
is outweigh to the disadvantages
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