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learning English st school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English ? Should we tray to ensure the survival og local languages and , if so, how?

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English is an
internationl
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international
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languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
 widely used all over the world.
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this
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This
 tremendous
globlization
growth to a global or worldwide scale
globalization
globalisation
 of English language raises a local concern about
scocity
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
 own language and the risk of local language dying out. I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 English should be kept to international
use
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 or if needed
workwise
a person who works at a specific occupation
workers
. I think locals should
use
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thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 own
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languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
 between them,
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disscuss
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discusses
discuss
this
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 issue using examples to support arguments and demonstrate points. On one hand, English has been required in different non-English speaking countries for job applications,
gradute
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduate
graduated
 studies and education.
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, in Saudi Arabia, where I live, English
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a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
 certificate is mandatory to almost all
acamic
associated with academia or an academy
academic
 jobs or
gradute
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduate
 studies.
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, many
undergraude
under the level of the ground
underground
undergrad
undergraduate
 faculties teach
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thier
of them or themselves
their
 students in English.
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,
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,
it is important to have the basic skills of
English
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the English language
English language
English languages
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at
to
 work, study or if needed.
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,
this
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does't
does not
doesn't
 mean dying of local
languges
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
languages
. Locals have to make sure they
use
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thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 own
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languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
 when communicating between them or in
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thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 daily lives. A recent study conducted by Arabic Association
conculded
having come or been brought to a conclusion
concluded
conceded
concludes
 that
majoratory
used of animals that move seasonally
migratory
 of Saudis
ensure
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ensures
 using
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thier
of them or themselves
their
 local
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a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
 when communicating with Arbs or speaking to family member and daily
use
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. In conclusion,
although
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 English
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languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
 is an international and widely used
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languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
,
Accept space
,
 we need to keep our local
languges
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
languages
. In future, locals have to take
intiatives
readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiatives
initiative
 to spread and keep
thiere
of them or themselves
their
 local
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a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
 among
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thier
of them or themselves
their
third
 culture.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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