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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have the opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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It is believed that living in the fast developing and focused technology word allows studying abroad while in the earlier time it was less impossible.
However
,
this
 chance has advantages as well as disadvantages and
this
 essay will consider both of them. On the one side, those who tend to think that studying abroad is considered an advantage cite on various aspects.
First
 of all, the main benefit which students might get from studying at a non-local university is networking. An example might be seen as involving in different studying environment allows being connected with people who have a background and views of
life
 dissimilar of you, which could be positive into developing students' attitude for
life
. Another positive aspect of studying in a foreign country is a chance to be engaged in another culture, which
also
 might bring to students a different view of
life
 and allows enhancing knowledge of other people. On the other side, there is a key drawback of a foreign country to student, which can overwrite the positive aspects of
life
 in it. Without doubt studying abroad might be stressful for students and can be caused by loneliness and in some cases might trigger depression. After arriving in a new country students have to adjust to a new environment which might take in some situation for a few months. What is more,
this
 state of unfamiliar with surroundings does not permit to be fully focused on learning which can be caused of future issues for students. Overall, despite the positive fact that the foreign education admits to enhancing the view of words and understanding the difference between countries, there are some aspects which could be considered as insurmountable for students.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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