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the graph below showspredictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030

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The line graph below highlights the assumptions about the
number
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 of people who will learn three major world languages over the ten year period, between 2020 and 2030. Overall,
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what thing
what
 stands out from the graph that there will be equal
number
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 of people who will study both
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spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
 and
mandarin
the dialect of Chinese spoken in Beijing and adopted as the official language for all of China
Mandarin
, while the
number
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 of people who will learn
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 predicted as the highest. Looking at the details, in 2020 there will be the lowest rate of people who will study mandarin, but
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number
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 will increase significantly till 2030, in
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 year there will be approximately 550 people who
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the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
 acquire mandarin. With respect to
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spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
 language, in 2020 the
number
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 of people who will learn
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spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
 is 200,
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 figure will rise slightly till until 2024, in 2024 the rate will remain stable, and
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 it will increase gradually till 2030,
subsequently
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 around 500 people will know
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spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
.
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english language
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the English language
English language
 will be one of the most popular and major languages in the world. In 2020, the rate will be the highest among three languages, there will be 550 people who will study
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
, following
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, the
number
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 will increase significantly till 2024, and
then
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 it will see a slight fall to 600 people, but
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 will be followed by
gradual rise
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a gradual rise
 till 2030, and there will be around 750 people who will know
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
.

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