It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other coutries. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples from your experience
It is irrefutable that international tourism has taken mammoth dimensions as it has become the backbone of many economies of the world.
This
situation has merits and demerits as well but from my point of view, its advantages Linking Words
overstrip
its disadvantages.
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outweigh
To begin
with, the first and foremost is employment.Owing Linking Words
to
, Correct pronoun usage
to this
tourism
industry provides Add an article
the tourism
plethora
of avenues of jobs to local people,who might be unemployed Add an article
a plethora
otherwise
as they can work in many hotels, Linking Words
restaurants
, Correct word choice
and restaurants
tour
guides, drivers and so on. Change preposition
as tour
Therefore
, not only Linking Words
they
earn bread and butter but Add a missing verb
do they
also
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can
raise their standard of living, Verb problem
apply
secondly
, tourists get Linking Words
first hand
knowledge as they come to know about the culture, traditions and Add a hyphen
first-hand
life style
of Correct your spelling
lifestyle
host
country. Add an article
the host
As a result
, they widen their horizon of knowledge by acquiring Linking Words
this
level of information. Linking Words
Additionly
, when visitors pump a large chunk of money , Correct your spelling
Additionally
this
allows local Linking Words
business
like hotels, restaurants and shops to flourish. Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
This
, in Linking Words
turn
means that the whole economy of Add the comma(s)
turn,
region
thrives.
Correct article usage
the region
However
, on the other side, it has Linking Words
few
demeritsCorrect article usage
a few
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apply
also
. First of all, tourists give birth to criminals as they have several precious and costly things . Linking Words
For example
- Linking Words
camera
, jewellery and cash Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
so
some natives think Correct word choice
apply
them
as easy prey. Change preposition
of them
This
results Linking Words
into
rising crime at Change preposition
in
tourism
spots. Replace the word
tourist
Furthermore
, it poses a Linking Words
deterimental
Correct your spelling
detrimental
affect
on health because tourists spread Replace the word
effect
alot
of garbage Correct your spelling
a lot
on
different places, which may cause grave problems.Recently, a fatal infectious disease called Change preposition
in
covid-19
Correct your spelling
COVID-19
come
into view, which Wrong verb form
came
are
causing deaths globally Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Change preposition
at on
on
alarming rate Correct your spelling
an
and
surprisingly no vaccination, treatment or medicine Correct word choice
apply
is
found Wrong verb form
has been
till now so
, Rephrase
yet
visitors
had better think aboutCorrect word choice
so visitors
ownself
Correct pronoun usage
themselves
as well as
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host
country.
In conclusion, Add an article
the host
a host
i
would opine that its pros overlooked its cons and it is Change the capitalization
I
a
high time to solve Correct article usage
apply
this
problem on Linking Words
Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
level and individual level.Correct your spelling
government
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