Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

With rapid technology development that advertising industry has
also
been appearing in worldwide corners, whether or not advertisement will be affects to citizen being different for individuals have become a widely debated topic. Many believed that whatever teenage or adult have always referred from advertising on the box other maintain that kind of advertising form just provides a few of suggests to consumers it not means people suppose to totally copy by advertising. Given that people has been begun to learn
dress
up based on advertising and a
part
of successful company’s are being mainstream by effect of advertising. I strongly agree that advertising will be effective impacts of customer of minds. In terms of clothes style of
teenages
any movable possession (especially articles of clothing)
things
, on the same street, people cans look as some
dress
up of persons for four or five times in sense that almost people were affected by advertising. It's just like that advertising wants to be told to the audience what is the right
dress
up. Lets most
part
of consumers
dress
up as similar.
For instance
, survey from a Hong Kong University by students that most common of brands which is Nike. People
had wore
Suggestion
were wearing
wore
that brand at daily that roughly excess 1000 times. It meant a lot of people had effected from Television and society media. Regarding mobile phone, the three most popular of cellphone which are Apple, Sammany and Sony company’s
consequently
, most
part
of city people’s has often used those brands.
Instead
, fewer users just used a not the same brand that will be strange from other
peoples
Suggestion
people's
outlooks. To be honest, it has become a sort of morbid state which is deeply controlling people chose for products. As examples of BBC News report that Apple In.
C had
a family of Afroasiatic tonal languages (mostly two tones) spoken in the regions west and south of Lake Chad in north central Africa
Chad
sold out a mass of number for a year that approximately 100000 into 150000 stocks. Having discussed that most
part
of
dress
Suggestion
the dress
up from just according by certain of the large company standard
that is
significantly impacted to people thinks and most of the company marketing channel is having similar on certain tricks. I firmly believed that the advertising industry had severe influences to consumers.
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