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Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, there is a big issue in many countries that some people don't understand how to bring up their
child
 properly. It is undeniable that
this
 problem is not included in school education.
Although
, some people think it is not a significant problem and useless for teaching the student how to
parent
 their
child
 well. Both will be discussed and give some detail in the following paragraph.
However
, There are some people who interest to read many books and find a lot of information how to be a good mother and father.
Therefore
, learning about
this
 issue is not important for them and it's waste their time to study about
this
 in school. They are too young to learn how to grow
up their
Accept comma addition
up, their
child
 in high school age.
Likewise
, they should learn and prepare for their future education more than learning a lesson
that is
 not vital.
On the contrary
, It is necessary that they should know the fundamental data of becoming a great
parent
. There are a lot of populations that don't know how to deal with their
child
 because they don't have enough time to analyse what they have to do.
Furthermore
,
this
 will be one of the reasons why there a lot of people that have mental problem. Domestic violence is the significant thing that happens in the family with less understanding about their kids. To conclude, Both ways have pros and cons in their own ways. Though, It depends on the society and the country they live. Those are have enough help to the
parent
 with the newborn. From my point of view, I think we should learn how to be the
parent
 when we was young because at that time we know the feeling of the
child
. Thereby, we really feel how the
child
 feel.
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