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Writing Samples
Band 6

your local hospital has averted for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to some work at the hospital in your free time. write a letter to the hospital. In your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do give details of when you be available for this work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing on behalf of
advertisement
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an advertisement
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 for
unpaid
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the unpaid
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 word to help the local hospital. I am happy to apprise you that I am extremely interested to work as
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a volunteer
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 in your hospital. I have done
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 type of job for a long time and I merely love it. I have been to myriad countries, especially the undeveloped ones, handling children who are seriously ill. Now, I would appreciate helping
who
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those who
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 needs some kind attention in my city. Since I have experience in dealing with children, I could provide support in
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the infant
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 area as
taleteller
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a taleteller
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 or any
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other
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 function you have available to distract them, more than a litter, from rough moments that they are going through. As I am a part-time employee, I will be able to work there from 2p.
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. to 5p.
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. on weekdays and from 8a.
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. to 12p.
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. on Saturdays. If you require any
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 information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to the opportunity of being at your service. Yours faithfully, Maisa Fernandes.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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