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The chart above shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

The chart above shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
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The bar graph compares the percentage of different qualifications acquired by Australian males and females after graduating from school in 1999.
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, out of five areas of study, the biggest discrepancy in
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the percentage
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 of
men
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 and
women
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 was observed in
'Skilled
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the 'Skilled
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 Vocational Diploma' category,
whereas
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 the lowest gap was in Bachelor's
Degree
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.
Although
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 females outnumbered males in Undergraduate Diploma and Bachelor's
Degree
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 qualifications, the other categories were dominated by
men
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. It is evident that
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 Vocational Diploma' was by far the most popular discipline of study chosen by
men
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, comprising a hefty 90%. In stark contrast,
this
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 category was least popular among their female counterparts accounting for a mere 10
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per cent
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 - 9 times less.
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, Bachelor's
Degree
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 was almost equally popular for either
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the genders
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genders
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gender
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 - around 45% and 50
percent
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per cent
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 for
men
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 and
women
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 respectively. The figure for Masters and Postgraduate
degree
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 students did not show much difference regarding both genders, around 60-70 and 30-40 per cent for males and females respectively.
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, a difference by half can be observed in Undergraduate Studies comparing
men
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 (about 35%) and their
women
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 counterparts (approximately 70%), which was the highest figure for
women
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, degree with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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