How to reduce bad effects of tourists who pollutes tourist attraction

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In order to overcome
this
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problem, higher authorities should implement some strict rules against those who pollutes these tourist attractions and impose heavy fines who break them.
For instance
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, in
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last year
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the last year
, at
national secturay
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the national secretary
national secretary
of
dehradrun
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, everywhere high security cameras have been installed and list of rules have hung on all walls. So whoever caught
in
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on
by
those cameras
unabiding
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those rules has
impossed
set forth authoritatively as obligatory
imposed
impressed
to pay
heavy fine
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heavy fines
a heavy fine
of
rs
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Rs
5000 and sent to prison for 3months. Due to
this
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,
bagpackers
a hiker who wears a backpack
backpackers
bag packers
must have fear somewhere back of their head
.
Accept space
.
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hence
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
,
this
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step will eventually increase awareness in tourists which
directly
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directors
will be attributed
to reduce
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to reducing
harmul effects
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the harmful effects
harmful effects
.
Accept space
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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