1. You are a parent and you need information about a school trip your child is going on. Write a letter to the class teacher. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what information you are looking for • inform the teacher about any specific needs your child has

Dear
Ms.
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Mona, I am Swastika Tusu, mother of your student Kistika Tusu, Grade II, Student No. 123456. I am writing to you in response to your notice regarding the school
trip
to
Blue
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Mountains on 6th May
,
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2020.
To begin
with, apart from the information provided in the brochure regarding the
trip
, I would like to get some more details on the same.
First
, what is the main purpose of
this
trip
during
this
time of the year?
Furthermore
, as it is 3 days long
trip
, what essentials items should we pack for the
trip
?
Also
, how many teachers and students in total are going for the
trip
? As you are already aware
about
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Kistika’s condition. She has a dietary requirement and cannot consume dairy and gluten.
Also
, she must take her supplementary tablets every night after dinner. Would it be of any inconvenience to your team
accompanying
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the children on
this
trip
? I hope you will be able to help me resolve my queries. Please feel free to contact me if you need more information regarding Kistika. Yours sincerely, Swastika Shrestha
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