Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.

Although
the arts play a fundamental role in a modern society, but some people think that artists should not be given full liberty of expressing their thoughts and ideas. Others believed that the inventor must get full autonomy of showing their creativity. It is a debatable. I agree to some extent with
this
statement and discuss both of views.
To begin
with, the artists play a crucial role in every Nation and the liberty of them is always an issue for authorities.
Firstly
, full autonomy of the artist may adverse effect on the individuals and Society.
Such
as, many times, some artists are painting any objectionable picture, adding any anti-social dialogue that resulted they hurt the sentiments of the public.
Secondly
, it may become a cause of the demise of some people.
For example
, once an inventor made a picture, in which, the gods of Hindu are begging.
This
causes, there was a great panic among the Hindus.
Furthermore
, sometimes, it has a some negative impact on teenagers and children. Because, some arts are bad, made by some bad artists. So, these arts create crime and violence in the society.
On the other hand
, there are some positive view of giving full freedom to the artists.
Firstly
, every artist can unveil all the social issues of the society without any fear because anyone could not force them to do not show their thoughts.
Secondly
, it is
also
helpful for the economy.
Such
as, they create masterpieces and bring recognition for every country on the map of the world.
Furthermore
, they can spread awareness through their arts. To sum up,
although
artists are required to give full Liberty for exploring their creativities but government ought to give freedom in limit, with which, they could not hurt others feelings.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • creativity
  • freedom of expression
  • innovative
  • ethical considerations
  • societal morals
  • unregulated
  • provoke thought
  • controversy
  • government regulation
  • censorship
  • diverse perspectives
  • artistic expression
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