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Dear Sir or Madam: With
this
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 letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the
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Magdeburg
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. I am currently studying
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Master’s Degree in civil engineering at the Noshirvani
University
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 of Technology
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 in Babol, Iran, which is ranked first among Iranian engineering universities,
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 the Times Higher Education for two consecutive years (2018 and 2019). I was very delighted to find the opportunity to
study
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 With
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 of
Magdeburg
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a
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student.
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 but not least, I am very curious about studying at
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Magdeburg
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. I have chosen to apply for the
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 of
Magdeburg
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,
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 because I like its module system of
study
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. I especially appreciate the wide range of offered modules and the freedom
in making
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 your
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 plan. Many of the modules offered are unique
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 me because there is no equivalent at my home
university
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. The second main reason I chose the
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university
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 of
Magdeburg
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 is that it ranks 177th in the world's universities. During my prior studies, I have found out, that I would like to specialize in numerical methods. The
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 of
Magdeburg
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 gives me a chance to get in touch with these excellent teachers. In my
last
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 year at the Noshirvani
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 of Technology
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, I worked on an Error Estimate and Adaptive Refinement in Bedload Sediment Transport using
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 Squares Meshless Method. During that time I learned FORTRAN and Python programming language. I liked my project and I am keen to continue in it. I would like to use my stay at the
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Magdeburg
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for
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developing
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 my skills in research. The possibilities that give me the
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Magdeburg
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further
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 expand those at my home
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. I would very much like to
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 at the
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 of
Magdeburg
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.
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, I could improve my English and increase my confidence.
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, I am confident that my experience in the Netherlands would be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and
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 general development. Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response. Sincerely, Marziye Ramezani

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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