Write a 300 to 500-word ‘end of project’ letter to your client

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Dear Australia National University Director of Admissions, I am Hoang Le Minh and I’m currently interested in attending the Bachelor of Marine Conservation Ecology program at Australia National University. I love the oceans and have joined voluntary programs about cleaning beaches and protecting sea turtles. I believe that I can get more knowledge about marine in

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your university, which will be very helpful in the voluntary programs about oceans that I’m going to join

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summer. Recently, I have finished my high school diploma in LSTS

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month. In LSTS, I started a start-up with my best friends, where we made small souvenirs and bracelets from shells and jewels. After 3 months, we decided to use our profits to go to the beach to collect trash and donate to the local elementary school.

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, I have experience in taking care of sea turtles and coral reefs. I went to the Nui Chua National Park twice to spend a week with the sea rangers to learn about those skills. After that, I decided to take some classes and workshops about corals and their surrounding species. I firmly believe that I have enough skills, talents, and enthusiasm for

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Marine Conservation Ecology program. I look forward to speaking to you and the members of the admissions department. If there any question please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely,

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Coherence & Cohesion

Attempt to structure your paragraphs more distinctly around single ideas for better clarity. Each paragraph should ideally focus on one main point, supported by specific details or examples.

Task Achievement

While your enthusiasm and relevant activities are well-highlighted, expanding on how these experiences have uniquely prepared you for the program can strengthen your letter. Focus on specific skills or lessons learned and directly link them to the demands of the degree.

General

In terms of tone, maintaining a balance between professional and personal tones is key. You’ve managed this well, but be mindful of using too casual language in professional settings.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

236 words

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Write a 300 to 500-word ‘end of project’ letter to your client

With the increase in computer use, many people feel that school do not need to put the emphasis that they used to on basic handwriting skills or mathematics skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern life, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food and in other products like clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that the communication between family members is lesser today compared to the past. Do you agree or disgaree?