Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that we should increase the prices of

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products

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so that less

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will be eaten. I think that

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may cause damage to the

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industry

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and cause

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to live unhappy lives,

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people

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can be healthier.

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idea can pose a threat to the sweet-food manufacturers because there will be fewer

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buying their goods. As we all know, the higher the price of an item is ,the less customers buy it. So if we make sugary

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more expensive, a lot of

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will abandon them and buy other

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to enjoy themselves and

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, the sweet food

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will fail to sell their

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and be endangered.

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, citizens may prefer to buy more fast food like chips to have fun

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of

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drinks or

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. The damage to the

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industry

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may

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lead to the unemployment of workers. The higher price may

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be responsible for an unhappy life. It is evident that sweet

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and beverages are the favourite goods of many civilians and eating

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is a good way to enable

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to feel happiness. So when we raise the prices of sugary

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, fewer

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can afford them and they lose a method to satisfy themselves.

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will result in a worse life, especially for the poor-- they have few methods to have fun and one of the main ways is prohibited.

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,

people

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may have better bodies if they take in less sweet things. The high level of

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is always a cause

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fat and can present a challenge to

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’s health. With the rise of sugary goods’ prices, more and more

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will have other

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and drinks and

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has a good effect on their fitness.

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, they may eat more fruits to take place sweet

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and fruits are beneficial to them. There is slang

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apple a day and doctors keep away’.

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sugary items more expensive may allow

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to have

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their bodies, but

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will lead to damage to the

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industry

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and enable

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to live

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unhappy life.