Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc to serve society . Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Concerning to

education

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educate

there are a broader range of opinions by which young people

should opted

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should opt

whether proceed academic studies or serving

community

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the community

. In

this

essay will be discussed both views whereby it is argued that how crucial young adults should go straight from secondary to university, following by explained the reasons of the foundation for those ones who

chose serve

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chose to serve

society. It is believed that encouraging young adults to proceed academic studies after finishing the secondary provides a greater far-reaching progress in their

studies

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study

methods and motivate their learning. In

this

way, those characteristics are a vital way to become faster and more efficient learns in order to adapt themselves to new academic approaches by virtue to reach good grades, mastering information, or in other hand a subject is not what the person was expected, the motivation together with discipline would help one to overcome their difficulties.

For

example there

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example, there

are so many case studies that reveal the importance of master tools

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as researching, paraphrasing and respecting

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essay

deadlines in order to reach a higher qualification

in

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at

the end of the bachelor and find a well-paid job. Young adult should be encouraged to serve society because of doing so will help them to build up their personality and awareness in order to become a better citizen. Starting work provides routines and responsibilities which should help to become more mature in the personal and professional life.

In addition

, receiving a monthly remuneration will make them to contribute

for

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to

paying

tax

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taxes

, and pension as

also

constitute family become a priority.

For instance

, psychology magazine report academic studies which introduce the theme of serving community for those ones who do not know about the dream job they wondering to do in the future,

as a result

these youth when introduced into the labour work they show a higher performance and focus employee

.

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To sum

up both

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up, both

views

are based

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is based

on

distinct purpose

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the distinct purpose

of teaching a young people to become a better citizen.

Although

, serving society will bring several social

responsibility

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responsibilities

to individuals as well as to

community

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the community

, rather than those ones who kept studies at university.

Therefore

, my point of view is based on continue to study because of those ones are much more prepared, focusing and motivated to

readapted

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adapt

adapted

adopted

readopted

them to

advances

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advance

studies

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study's

study

methodology.