Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc to serve society . Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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Young adult should be encouraged to serve society because of doing so will help them to build up their personality and awareness in order to become a better citizen. Starting work provides routines and responsibilities which should help to become more mature in the personal and professional life. Suggestion
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