Dieting can play major role for keep healthy life .Do you agree or disagree.

#role #life

Some argue that dieting is

most significance

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more significance

for improving our health and others believe that gives adverse impact

for

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our society. Both views are discussed in

this

assay

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

by giving

example

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examples

an example

. I totally believe that dieting

offer

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offers

significant impact for our health more than harm’s influence. In the present day more and more girls who among the young generation are extraordinary followed dieting to make

thin body shape

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a thin body shape

in excess of natural body figure.

This

is happen

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has happened

happens

owing to reasons of wrong perception which has socialized from marketing strategies.

However

, from dieting method, exercise and nutrition’s are lagged for the body well

enough

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enough, then

then

makes

mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'

does

influence in the society.

For example

, the science researchers group

where

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was

were

in California University has discovered that the women can’t get natural pregnancy who having long term less nutrition dieting style.

Moreover

conventional food style

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the conventional food style

has

tendency

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tendered

dispersed from nowadays because dieting style. It is the well known fact that obesity is

much debited issue

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a much debited issue

present age

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the present age

. In today’s sophisticated

world people

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world, people

are

become

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becoming

more and more busy so they haven’t good enough time to doing exercises for

maintain

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maintaining

their health between BMI scale. The dieting is the best way for them to control their physical condition. Restriction of food not only makes

safe guard

make safe

safeguard

from various

kind

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kinds

non communicable

(of disease) not capable of being passed on

noncommunicable

diseases

such

as diabetic, heart disease and cancer but only improves mental fitness

from

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for

human.

For instance

, according to

researcher paper

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the research paper

research paper

a research paper

which Oxford University has published that the person who has taken metformin drug from long term has

high risk

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a high risk

of cancer. To sum up, if one weights the pros and cons of the dieting that advantage of it gives more out weight than disadvantages. I

am convince

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am convinced

that government should

furthermore

promote programmers make them away and keep control of it.

Sat May 02 2020

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Dieting can play major role for keep healthy life .Do you agree or disagree.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disgree with this statement?

The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The process presents information about the water cycle, an unceasing flow of water across and beneath the Earth’s surface.

Today, TV channels broadcast men's sport shows more than women's sport shows. Why? Should TV channels give equal showtime for women's sport and men's sport?