1. Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few people

has

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have

have had

different thought about the youngsters must go to

university

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to

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for

their education and some of them think that they must be encouraged to

work

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to

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with

their serve society.

i

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I

will be discussing below by providing both the views and my opinion as well. The main fundamental right is the education which is required in the current scenario. . Education

also

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gives knowledge and skills

that is

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required in

life

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. Every part of the country prefers the young one’s to go the colleges to pursue the graduation for the betterment future, so that they can stand on their own feet

where

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

as one day to become the professionals as per their qualification. For an example: to be a doctor need to have the qualification of MBBS, only through study and practice

give

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gives

success to become a doctor.

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, the current situation some people cannot afford to pay the money for the institute which they are qualified for but

instead

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those

youngster

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youngsters

prefer to

work

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rather than studying in the

university

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.

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In India, especially in the rural area most of the youngster’s will be willing to study in the

university

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because of the poverty

life

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they urge to

work

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for their living like labour’s working in the factories or industries.

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However in

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However, in

my point of view

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

recommand

push for something

recommend

recommended

both the Studies as well

work

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at a same time. From

this

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i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

can give my own example when

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I

was studying as M.

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Come

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in the St. Agnes

university

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during day time and in the evening

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

was working as part time in the call centre that would

helped

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help

to pay my fees and even living

also

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. It really improved my

life

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and now

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refers to the speaker or writer

I

am the Account Manager in the call centre.

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Therefore to

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Therefore, to

conclude that every individual has their own choice of giving priority in education or

work

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service as per the situation and

life

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style in the world.