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Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

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Food
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waste
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 has been highlighted as an emerging issue that
maybe
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may be
 escaping broader public attention. Given that the issue has the potential for significant environmental impacts, identifying the reasons is key to finding the solutions. There are a number of reasons why a large amount of
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 is wasted every year.
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, since most fresh foods,
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 as meat and vegetables,
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is
 perishable, they usually have expiry or best before dates.
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 means that if people do not consume them quickly enough,
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the foods
 will be expired and no longer edible or free of hazards, which results in
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waste
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, the way humans prepare foods
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 contributes to
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.
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, if foods are badly prepared, either at home or in the restaurant, people will refuse to eat and
food
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waste
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 will often occur
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.
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, there are
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 a variety of solutions to mitigate
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 trend.
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, even if some foods are inedible for humans, they can be composted or used to feed livestock.
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 would not only benefit the agriculture
industry but
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industry, but
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 help reduce land filled organic matter that can be damaging to the environment.
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, even if the
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 is not inedible for livestock, it can still be used as a material to produce renewable energy.
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, some nations have taken steps to turn organic matter from
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 into biogas, generating electrical power at very low costs. In conclusion, even though
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waste
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 seems inevitable in today’s world, there are various ways to recycle it. Feeding livestock and generating energy can be two of the most useful ways to tackle
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waste
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.

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