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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvatages?

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Some people argue that most employees should
work
 from home rather than commuting to
work
 every day. I personally disagree with
this
 idea and will outline several reasons in the essay below. On the one hand, remote working may benefit employees in several ways.
Firstly
, since employees don’t have
to commuting
Suggestion
to commute
 to
work
, they have more time to prepare and get their
work
 done,
hence
 the efficiency is improved.
Also
,
this
 trend helps to reduce traffic congestion and
thus
 less pollution can be observed.
Secondly
, most
employess
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
employers
 may find it more comfortable to
work
 off-site than to sit
at
Suggestion
in
 the office for hours. They have all control over where to
work
, whether inside at their desk or in the garden, as well as when to rest.
On the other hand
, there are good grounds for
arguing working
Accept comma addition
arguing, working
 from home should not be applied to the majority of employees. When working from a home-based office, co-workers communicate via the Internet, while at their workplace, they are able to have face-to-face
interation
a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting
interaction
, so there is a high chance that virtual conversations is not as effective.
In addition
, distance working may lack of discipline. Employees are not monitored as when they are with their bosses and
as a result
, they are more likely to get distracted by their surroundings, resulting in reduced
work
 efficiency. In conclusion,
although
 I agree that remote working creates a more convenient environment for workers, I disagree that it should replace traditional workplace as it hinders interaction among co-workers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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