With the development of modern society is the loss of traditional ways of life. Is it important to keep our traditional ways of life? How can this be achieved?
Nowadays, with the advent of technology and globalization, people's lives are becoming more technological and modern.
This
is because the more progressed society
people live in, the more modern ways they learn. This
phenomena cause traditional way
of life
is going loss and disappearing in the modern society
. Although
the modern way
of life
are easier th
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benefits
society
. Hence
it is important to preserve them as they could prove beneficial for our new generations.
First
and foremost, traditional way
of life
is important to our health. Recently, people are more prone to various diseases due to the reason of unhealthy diet pattern and lifestyle. The various such
as obesity, heart disease, high blood pressure and cancer. This
is because in this
modernization society
, many of people prefer to eat fast foods which will harm people’s healthy, but
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health
this
situation can be solve easily by
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the traditional way
way
of life
, people more prefer to home cook which will reduce not necessary salt and oil. People also
prefer to eat the natural and organic food.
Secondly
, traditional way
of life
also
important to our culture
. Most of the culture
and histories have been made by the tradition things
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traditional
such
as historical building of each culture
, food, traditional wear, music and art. So, if the traditional way
of life
are not preserve and forge
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does not preserve
doesn't preserve
society
, it might be destroying and the h
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known
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new generations
a new generation
the new generation
Thirdly
, usually traditional ways of life
contributes a sense of belonging and comfort. It bring the famil
y member together and enables people to reconnect with their friends. In Suggestion
brings
this
modern society
, many of people are busy in their work and study. In addition
, appearance of 3C pro
ducts, it cause the Suggestion
the appearance
relat
ionship of people become more far. Suggestion
causes
This
is because nowadays many of people always stay in front of computer, laptop and mobile phone. However
, in tradition ways of
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traditional
life
, family member and friend always stay and play together such
as play chess. In the one hand, parents should spent the time
to their cSuggestion
should spend
hi
ldren and teach them regarding to the traditional thing. Suggestion
with
As a result
, they will know and understand the history and culture
thing and it also
can reduce in social criminal.
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there are some
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a conclusion there
the conclusion there
life
. First
, the government could merge the traditional thing into our into school curriculum. Consequently
, students would understand and have aware of their past and they would inherit traditional thing automatic
ally. Suggestion
a traditional thing
Next
, the government should encourage and promote the personalities and organizations that have maintained the traditional styles and their belongings. Further
, they also
can used the tradi
tional thing as a brand ambassador to spread Suggestion
use
this
knowledge to other sections of society
.
In conclusion, traditional lifestyle gives many benefit to our
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benefits
society
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