You were going to start a job next month, but you will not be able to. Write a letter to your future employer. In your letter explain the situation describe your problem(s) tell him/her when you can start work

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope

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finds you in good spirits and health. I would like to let you know that your official letter has been received

last

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week confirming my job position as a Product Manager at Unilever, stating to join on 25 April.

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, as I mentioned earlier to my interviewers regarding my unavailability till 15 May, it would be difficult for me to join you on the abovementioned date without any communication to my current employer. Because of my work

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and professionalism, my team members and supervisors have been depending on me to deliver the project by the

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week of May and after

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I will be engaged for another week to complete

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documentation.

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, it is mandatory to submit any resignation letter with

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prior notice so that my co-workers can take over my portfolio and job duties. Having said that, it would be fascinating if you allow me to start working for my new position from 16 May

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of 25 April.

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favour,

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, will not only help me to deliver my promises

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but

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assist me to keep my work reputation. I look forward to

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your thoughts on

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at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Zarif Enam

Sat May 02 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

208 words

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