Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Do you think this is positive development and negative development.

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It is estimated by scientists that auto driven cars will the driver based ones. Certainly, i th
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I
nk computer bese
d car
having a base
based
s would be more helpful in eliminating numbers of accidents and traffic problems.
To begin
with automatic cars play
a c
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plays
rucial role in saving lives of human beings.
This
is because numb
er of
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the number
a number
softwares are installed in cars to monitor the machinery of cars and give instructions to recognize any distress
such
as animals, holes ,de
st
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,
ruction of roads etce
tera. W
hilst a person avoid these issues upto
cer
tain extent, but autonomous machinery can deta
ct it
discover or determine the existence, presence, or fact of
detect
detract
detest
far away and take perfect decisions
that is
suitable to circ
umstances.
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the circumstances
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equently
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Consequently, this
this
function lead to accuracy that in turn give guarantee peop
le saf
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peoples'
peoples
ety and try to avoid fatal accidents as much as possible.
This
has been proven during 2011
trials of
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the 2011 trials
self driven cars in Singapore with the result around 78 %less chances of accidents as per expe
ctated.
considered likely or probable to happen or arrive
expected
Probing
further
,
this
advancement in automotive vehicles
also
cause to ease congestion on busy roads . A
ct
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ually, self driven cars are leased with a feature where a car can communicate to others same cars to keep maintain a certain distance and
also
follow the rules and regu
lations so to not
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regulations so as to
trap in any issue due to which others get stuc
ked.
caught or fixed
stuck
stoked
For example
, a recently toya
ta aut
omotive company recorded a highly declined number in traf
fic jam due
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a traffic jam
traffic jams
to automated cars.
Consequently
save some precious to use in s
omething else important.
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something else important
To sum up ,
hi
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,
ghly featured driv
erless car
s are quite beneficial in providing safety and less congestion of vehicles . U
nd
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.
oubtedly, researchers present an estimation about huge presence of autonomous cars within upco
ming years.
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the upcoming years
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Artificial intelligence
  • Sensors
  • Collision avoidance
  • Alleviate
  • Accidents
  • Efficiency
  • Environmental impact
  • Unemployment
  • Freedom of choice
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