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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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It is true that common languages,
such
 as English and Chinese, have the potential to become a global
language
.
Although
 some linguists argue that speaking the same
language
 could bring other minority languages to the verge of dying out, I contend that
this
 trend is a positive development overall. There are a number of benefits to the world's economy by using the same
language
.
First
, in order to process financial transactions between countries, communications between people from different geographical backgrounds are of importance. If one
language
 become a universal
language
,
language
 barriers will be removed, thereby facilitating international integration.
Second
, by using an international
language
, learners would have access to a wealth of knowledge written by
such
language
.
As a result
, there will be a better intellectual workforce in the future, ensuring the sustainable long-term growth of nations' economy. There are
also
 a variety of beneficial impacts of a predominant
language
 on society and culture. Primarily,
this
 might help preserve cultural elements, especially intangible ones.
For instance
, if a traditionalist writes blogs about traditional stories in his country on the Internet in English, there will be more people in other nations knowing about the history and culture of his country.
In addition
, speaking the same
language
 benefits society.
For example
, with the use of a universal dialect
that is
 conducive to mutual understandings, immigrants can avoid unnecessary fights with local people and easily adapt to a new living environment, which build a peaceful society. In conclusion, the trend of using one
language
 to communicate over the world is the positive development.
This
 benefits not only the country's economy, but
also
 societies as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enhanced
  • streamlining
  • diverse cultures
  • accelerate
  • exchange of information
  • erosion
  • linguistic diversity
  • dominance
  • unequal power dynamics
  • marginalizing
  • reinforce
  • economic benefits
  • reduced translation
  • diplomacy
  • acquisition
  • exacerbating
  • social inequalities
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