The two pie charts illustrate the average expenses in a country
on
household categories in the years 1950 and 2010.
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for
Overall
, at the beginning of the period, a significant share of total expenses was spent on housing, Linking Words
however
, in comparison, Linking Words
at the end
of the period the most amount of money was spent on Linking Words
food
category . Add an article
the food
Conversely
, the expenditure on health care constituted the least in both years.
With regard to housing, in 1950 it accounted for just under three-quarters of total expenditure, Linking Words
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nevertheless
after over 6 decades the number experienced a more than threefold decrease to approximately a fifth, Add a comma
,nevertheless
however
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on the contrary
, food comprised only 11.2% in 1950 and experienced a large increase up to 34% in 2010. Linking Words
Likewise
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transportation
section composed only 3.3% at the beginning and rose to less than a fifth In 2010.
Correct article usage
the transportation
On the other hand
, over the period given health care constituted 2.4% of total Linking Words
expense
at the beginning and Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
this
number almost doubled to one in twenty, in 2010. Linking Words
Also
, it should be noted that Linking Words
education
category did not experience much of a difference over the years , only a mere 0.3% decrease from 6.6% to 6.3%
Another point that should be highlighted is that the amount of money spent on other items was roughly one in twenty at the start, Correct article usage
the education
nonetheless
in the Linking Words
second
year(2010) it rose to almost a fifth.Linking Words