Some people think that International students exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students.Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

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Often
,
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,
it is said that sending students
abroad especially
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abroad, especially
young ones within
international students exchange offer
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the international students exchange offer
could be more advantageous. Undoubtedly,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe
this
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offer can have
positive effect
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a positive effect
positive effects
on
scholar's mentality
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the scholar's mentality
towards other students and
intellectuals
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intellectual
skills.
This
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will discuss both the influences.
First
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and foremost thing could be noticed in children's attitude towards their classmates. Moving foreign lead learner's
to understand
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understanding
completely others
,
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,
so that they could live in that city
.
Accept space
.
By doing so, they get
more aware
Suggestion
more awareness
as well as more familiar to live safely. Surprisingly dealing with situations boost their self confidence and strong personality to face the challenges.
Such
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as in
US
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the US
most of the students
dropout
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drop out
the schools
anc
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
move back to their countries, only because they didn't like atmosphere of schools and sometimes become
victim
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victims
a victim
the victim
of bullying.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global awareness
  • Interconnected
  • Competitive edge
  • Cultural shock
  • Prohibitive
  • Inequality
  • Adaptability
  • Fosters
  • Enhance
  • Communication abilities
  • Personal growth
  • Accessibility
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