The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph compares the average
emissions
of carbon dioxide per person
in 4 European countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, it is clear that
the UK produced the most emissions
per capita of the 4 nations over the period although
the levels fell slightly. The amount of CO2 emitted per person
dropped more markedly in Sweden while
levels rose in Italy and Portugal.
In 1967, the UK and Sweden had the highest emissions
per person
with around 11 metric tonnes
and 9 tonnes
respectively. Portuguese people had a much lower output, with under 2 tonnes
and Italians about double this
. Over the next
decade, carbon dioxide emissions
soared in Sweden to peak at just over 10 tonnes
per person
before falling suddenly. By the end of the period, Swedes had reduced their levels to under 6 tonnes
while
in the UK, the figure had fallen less sharply to around 9 tonnes
.
In contrast
, there were significant increases in the CO2 emitted by Italians and Portuguese over the 40 years. Italy’s figure almost doubled, making it the second
highest emitter by 2007 while
Portugal’s figure rose even more dramatically to about 5 tonnes
per person
in the final year.Submitted by namtiprod on
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