The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy  and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph compares the average
emissions
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of carbon dioxide per
person
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in 4 European countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the UK produced the most
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per capita of the 4 nations over the period
although
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the levels fell slightly. The amount of CO2 emitted per
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dropped more markedly in Sweden
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levels rose in Italy and Portugal. In 1967, the UK and Sweden had the highest
emissions
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per
person
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with around 11 metric
tonnes
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and 9
tonnes
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respectively. Portuguese people had a much lower output, with under 2
tonnes
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and Italians about double
this
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. Over the
next
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decade, carbon dioxide
emissions
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soared in Sweden to peak at just over 10
tonnes
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per
person
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before falling suddenly. By the end of the period, Swedes had reduced their levels to under 6
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while
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in the UK, the figure had fallen less sharply to around 9
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.
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, there were significant increases in the CO2 emitted by Italians and Portuguese over the 40 years. Italy’s figure almost doubled, making it the
second
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highest emitter by 2007
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Portugal’s figure rose even more dramatically to about 5
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per
person
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in the final year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, person, tonnes with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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