In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

It is a fact that The Crime rate is burgeoning and becoming more riotous in most countries of the world, Nowadays. Many governments have taken extensive steps to the problem by implementing new legislation,

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has proved unsuccessful and the situation is getting bigger and tougher each year. Perhaps we need to Scrutinize the causes again and find out the solutions.

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, I think Poverty is prompt of getting a rise in the crime rate which is increasing the gap between the poor and the rich day by day in most countries. The

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reason is increasing the use of alcohol and drugs. The Majority of crimes are committed by people who have forced to take them and addicted to drugs. Solving these problems is onerous. The government should emanate procedures to increase the employment rate, which might help to reduce the difference between poor and rich.

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, criminals who are addicted to drugs should be rehabilitated and trained them so that they can enter the workforce.

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, Providing job Opportunities only convey the part of

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, there has been success strategies in the fight against drugs. I concluded that Crime will continue to increase, Especially in Populous and over Populated areas. Unless we can find an effective solution to address these issues.

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, the Government should Organise addiction based programs to enlightening awareness, especially for teens, adolescents.