Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that the use of

smartphones

has turned into a main hobby in free

time

for many. In my

opinion

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Opinion

, the high technology in these devices causes that

this

development could be a negative

trend

Suggestion

Trend

. The reason for allocating a large

proportion spending

Accept comma addition

proportion, spending

time

with/

smartphones

stems from the fast-growth of technology. In another word, new brand

cellphones

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cell phones

have a number of new applications,

such

as a variety of games, playing limitless songs, high quality cameras and accessibility to the Internet, which all of them are interesting to many people. The attractiveness of these options immerses people in their smartphone, and they no longer pay attention to how much

time

they waste. The other common reason for being hi-tech mobiles as a primary leisure activity is the existence of various social media networks, namely

Face book

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Facebook

, Instagram, Twitter and WhatsApp, which are commonly used as a communication way to meet new people and keep in touch with them anytime. So the result of using these flashy options in

smartphones

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smart phones

is that

users

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Users

waste plenty of

time

to entertain themselves. In my view, spending most of our spare

time

on mobile phones could be a negative development

due

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Due

to creating health and social problems.

Firstly

, looking at the screen of

smartphones

for long hours means more exposure to high volumes of electromagnetic radiation, which is very harmful to sight and brain.

Secondly

, from the social point of view, entertaining people with a mobile phone may affect interpersonal interactions and destroy family relationships because

instead

of spending

time

with family and friends, our free

time

is spent on mobile phones, and

then

it causes individuals to become isolated and

also

get away from their family and society. In conclusion, I believe that

smartphones

overcome our free

time

hobbies due to their interesting technology, which is an undesirable trend