All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty?

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The latest statistics show that the rich are increasing their wealth while the poor are becoming more numerous and more desperate.
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causes manifold problems for individuals and society as a whole and,
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the solutions may seem straightforward, they are not easy to implement. An imbalance in the spread of wealth in society results in a crippling cycle of
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for many residents. The problems are diverse but interrelated. Crime is a major effect of
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, especially violent crime and property-related crime. Alcohol and substance abuse,
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self-destructive, are seen as ways of coping with
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. Some poor people are forced to take jobs with unsafe or hazardous working conditions. In some cases, children must work to help support the family.
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, inferior housing and living conditions for the impoverished are common causes of ill-health and disease; waterborne and food-related diseases are rife amongst the destitute. The effect of
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on society is destabilising. It is the chief cause of social tension leading to riots and conflict, occasionally resulting in governments being brought down, as happened in the so-called Arab Spring. Children brought up in
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poverty develop
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antisocial and aggressive behaviour. There have been high-profile court cases in my country where underprivileged young teenagers have been found guilty of murder because they have killed someone in the course of an armed robbery. The solutions to
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are simple but challenging. Governments could impose more taxes on the affluent. Unfortunately, it is often the moneyed sector that keeps the government in power and corrupt officials are amongst the prosperous. There should be absolute transparency in government spending and governments must give priority to projects to help the poor. Above all, they should have access to education, training and employment programmes, a living wage, decent housing, sanitation and health care. Breaking the
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cycle and redressing the imbalance of wealth and resources with good governance will take time, but it will eventually eliminate some of the problems of crime, violence, sickness and addiction that plague the underclass
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Income inequality
  • Wealth gap
  • Socioeconomic disparities
  • Marginalized communities
  • Impoverished individuals
  • Privileged elite
  • Disparity in living standards
  • Social stratification
  • Exacerbate
  • Living below the poverty line
  • Income distribution
  • Lack of access to basic necessities
  • Food insecurity
  • Limited healthcare services
  • Education barriers
  • Socioeconomic mobility
  • Resentment
  • Economic disparities
  • Resource allocation
  • Underprivileged
  • Vulnerable populations
  • Cyclical nature of poverty
  • Government intervention
  • Multilateral cooperation
  • Empowerment
  • Progressive taxation
  • Equal opportunities
  • Social safety nets
  • Unemployment rate
  • Corruption
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