Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

I personally believe and agree that our personalities are predetermined

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of our genes before we are born.

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is because we every single of us are unique and different. Only with the unique in us, we can have different ways to treat things and different ways to think. These

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varieties

of thinking can lead to innovations or even to new theories in different subjects. I respect the

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determined

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our genes as I consider it as a part of the gift

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the supernatural being conceived as the perfect and omnipotent and omniscient originator and ruler of the universe; the object of worship in monotheistic religions

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gave to us when we were born.

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part of the sentence, but I disagree with the

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part of the sentence which is saying that there is nothing that we can do to change or adjust it. I believe that we can change anything in the world as long as we have the heart to succeed and a determined mind.

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, I believed that when we are young, we will be easily influenced and changed by the environment and the people around us. These factors

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may help

to shape our

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when we are young. Living near the forest when we are young may develop a

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that more willing to

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make an effort or attempt

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new things.

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is because he or she might already have tried many new kinds of things when they were young as there are many different and special things in the forest

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as small animals for them to discover. Another factor that might change the

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is the people

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are

around us when we are young.

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is a gigantic factor as your

personality

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changes when you are being with a certain group of people for a long period of time. There is an

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in Chinese called “近朱者赤

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近墨者黑”

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idiom

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can be defined as when you are near the

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color

a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect

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red

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you will

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become red, when you are near the

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color

a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect

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black

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you will

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become black. The

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color

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colour

red symbolizes good and nice people in

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and the

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color

a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect

colour

black symbolizes bad people

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as people that does not respect others. So,

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idiom

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can be defined as when you stay with people that are good and nice, you will slowly become a good and nice person too. When you are being with people that are bad and bullies other, you will slowly become and join one of them too. From

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we can learn that people can be changed and influenced by other people. So, in conclusion, I believe that our

personality

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is determined by our genes before we were born. But, our

personality

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can be changed by people and the environment around us or even by ourselves.