Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

I personally believe and agree that our personalities are predetermined
as a result
of our genes before we are born.
This
is because we every single of us are unique and different. Only with the unique in us, we can have different ways to treat things and different ways to think. These
variety
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varieties
of thinking can lead to innovations or even to new theories in different subjects. I respect the
personality
that is
determined
in
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by
our genes as I consider it as a part of the gift
god
the supernatural being conceived as the perfect and omnipotent and omniscient originator and ruler of the universe; the object of worship in monotheistic religions
God
gave to us when we were born.
Although
I agree
to
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with
the
first
part of the sentence, but I disagree with the
second
part of the sentence which is saying that there is nothing that we can do to change or adjust it. I believe that we can change anything in the world as long as we have the heart to succeed and a determined mind.
Furthermore
, I believed that when we are young, we will be easily influenced and changed by the environment and the people around us. These factors
may helped
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may help
to shape our
personality
when we are young. Living near the forest when we are young may develop a
personality
that more willing to
tyr
make an effort or attempt
try
new things.
This
is because he or she might already have tried many new kinds of things when they were young as there are many different and special things in the forest
such
as small animals for them to discover. Another factor that might change the
personality
is the people
that
is
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are
around us when we are young.
This
is a gigantic factor as your
personality
changes when you are being with a certain group of people for a long period of time. There is an
idiom
in Chinese called “近朱者赤
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,
,
近墨者黑”
This
idiom
can be defined as when you are near the
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
red
,
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,
you will
also
become red, when you are near the
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
black
,
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,
you will
also
become black. The
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
red symbolizes good and nice people in
this
idiom
and the
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
black symbolizes bad people
such
as people that does not respect others. So,
this
idiom
can be defined as when you stay with people that are good and nice, you will slowly become a good and nice person too. When you are being with people that are bad and bullies other, you will slowly become and join one of them too. From
this
idiom
we can learn that people can be changed and influenced by other people. So, in conclusion, I believe that our
personality
is determined by our genes before we were born. But, our
personality
can be changed by people and the environment around us or even by ourselves.

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