the table below illustrate UK participation in selected sports by gender between 2005/06 and 2008/09
The table chart below shows the percentages of optional sports participation between males and females from 2005/06 to 2008/09.
Overall
, it is clear that
indoor activities were the highest popular sports, meanwhile jogging and running sports experienced the lowest proportion of choices of men
and women
. In addition
, the percentage of cycling sport in men
was about two times higher than in women
.
From 2005/06 to 2008/09, participation in swimming and diving had the most impressive number, especially, the number of female
Change to a plural noun
females
were
always higher than male. In 2005/06 and 2008/09, there were 18.0% and 16.5% in Change the verb form
was
women
compared to 13.3% and 13% in men
respectively. In contrast
, the participation in jogging and running was the smallest number, which was under 5% in women
and 8% in the remained one as well as
there was not any significant difference between two
genders.
Correct article usage
the two
In
Cycling activities, which were selected by Change preposition
apply
men
, were almost two times higher than in women
. In 2006/07 and 2007/08, the percentages of male attendance were 13.3% and 13.8% in comparison to 6.8% and 6.5% of opposite participants respectively
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