some people say thay it is better to promote healthy lifestyle than spend so much money treat obese people. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is a common belief that to motivate the people who stay healthy is a better way rather than the

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of obese people's treatment. I will briefly elaborate

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healthy

healthiest

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lifestyle. In the modern life, many people suffer with a

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life, so some eating problems and overweight issue can occur. To inhibit, the ministry managers should enable to motivate these people before getting overweigh.

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, they

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catch other illness reason of the obesity. Clearly, not only the worst problem being obese,

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diabetes type-2 or heart diseases are a major issue for the people who work at the office or do not some sport activities. I firmly agree that in order to eliminate the rate of the overweight individuals should be done low

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for the communities.

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, in my town, the municipality opened a sport park

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year. The residents have begun to use these sports tools at the park.

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year, many of them lost weight and every single day they visit there to do their habits.

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to say, the residents keep aware of

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basic habit how its importance.

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, even if a person's consent to make a balance diet after being obese, it should be so hard. His or her stomach can not be empty, because of more consuming

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as any snacks or fast food.

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, if the authorities give more advice to the public to stay

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healthy

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, everybody can keep away from these types of sustenances.

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, the patients with type 2 diabetes have more problems with their kidney, if they suffer with obesity same time. To treat them, some special machine is necessary, and every single time they must go to the hospital. For

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reason, the

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is significantly increasing.

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, their life quality and past

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days have never liked as before. In conclusion, I restate that obesity should inhibit from the society in order to get a balanced diet habits. The ministry of

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should keep an eye on the rate of the obese people, and how much it is

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before they are getting the disease.