Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Travelling abroad is seen as a primary method to learn about other countries by some.The opponents,
however
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, think it is a good idea to acquire some
information
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about them watching
TV
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and using the internet.Both sides need a
close
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closer
view, here, I believe. From one angle, the feeling provided for people from travelling can substantially increase the efficiency levels of getting
information
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about other country.When a human feels himself or herself alive from being in a particular
country he
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country, he
or she becomes more likely to learn more about
this
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place.
In other words
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, I think if they feel any sense
from
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of
being as a representative of nation
of
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by
this
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government when they are inside of the people, eating the traditional cuisine of
this
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place or seeing natural habitat and historical facilities, it would be definitely better to get significant and substantial
information
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. From another angle, learning about other countries with watching
TV
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or using the spider net is more
ecionomical
using the minimum of time or resources necessary for effectiveness
economical
.
This
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is because,
yoy
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
can find easily any data about places throughout the internet. Especially, when you
utiize
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
utilize
utilise
networking platforms like YouTube or IT
(
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(
Information
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technologies
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Technologies
) technologies and gadgets like VR
(
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(
Virtual reality) headset or 3D googles in front of the smart
TV
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which can serve as a real view of
place
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the place
places
you are interested in it may be more productive in the case of
ecomomy
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the economy
economy
an economy
of the people and it can be affordable for them in order to get sufficient amount of
information
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, I think. To conclude, it would be insensible to put one side over another here, I believe.The feeling provided for people from travelling brings benefit to gain
healthy proportion
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a healthy proportion
of
information
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.Meanwhile, in condition of
economical side
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the economical side
of people with high satisfaction obtained by
TV
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or international network can bring
equal contribution
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an equal contribution
to learn about other countries.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersive
  • interactions
  • virtual means
  • cultural nuances
  • language acquisition
  • problem-solving
  • adaptability
  • sustainability
  • virtual tours
  • documentaries
  • sophisticated
  • realistic representations
  • comprehensive understanding
  • financial status
  • carbon footprint
  • digital resources
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