Q. The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the problems which are caused by the increasing number of overweight people on the

health

care system, some people believe that the key to solving these issues is to launch more courses in schools related to sports and

exercise

. I completely agree with the statement mentioned

above as

Accept comma addition

above, as

this

is the best way to tackle the problems of stress and strain amongst the public gaining much weight.

To begin

with, the most important factor to resolve the issues surrounding obesity and weight problems is by taking

actions

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action

in accordance with introducing

more

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the more sport

sport

and

exercise

lessons in schools.

In other words

, if more physical education courses are introduced in schools, it would prove to be a great help for students in terms of

health

and fitness, including the problem of weight.

Also

,

this

technique will ensure that the

next

generation is healthier and not supposed to indulge in

such

problems.

For example

, today, almost every good school in the region has been implementing a new curriculum for students, wherein

sport

and

exercise

classes is focused and practiced by staff along with the students.

As a result

,

this

method of exercising has brought a great impact on the lifestyle of people. Another point to consider is that having more sports lessons for children in schools will gradually result in students developing an interest in

exercise

, which in return make them active and attentive while studying. Having said that, students get along quite well with

studies

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the studies

and healthier lifestyle hand in hand by inculcating the sense of activeness and fresh

mindedness

. Eventually,

this

method of

learning physical

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learning, physical

education will ensure that children grow up to incorporate

sport

in their daily lives, which is certainly a natural and lasting way in order to improve public

health

. In conclusion, I agree that the

health

problems related to

increasing number

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the increasing number

an increasing number

of overweight and unfit people

actually demands

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actually demand

the introduction of

sport

and

exercise

classes in schools for children, which ultimately helps in improving the lifestyle of

coming generation

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the coming generation

coming generations

.