Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?

Film stars, music celebrities, and supermodels, people, who earn a lot of money and get
attention positive or negative
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attention, positive or negative
. But in fact, they do less than other people, whose professions are the most important, like doctors and engineers. Many people think that because of their prosperous
life
and due to the fact that everything they can from their
studies they
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studies, they
have already tried their
life
, it is empty and
therefore
they become depressed. You can buy anything you want and there is no more
dream
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a dream
in your
life
and your friends want to become more popular thanks to you. Many celebrities with
this
type of lifestyle
were
we are
we're
trying to suicide. Kurt Cobain tried to commit suicide twice, swallowing pills for the
first
time, and
then
having failed, shot himself after a while. In his
life
, there were not enough real friends, and he did not like his own song, which everyone liked; He hated it. But as for me, most celebrities have problems with their personal lives, or rather with a lack of it. Every celebrity should keep an eye on what he says, how he dresses, and what he does at home, even when not in front of the because anxious fans can take
photo
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a photo
photos
of them at any time.
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And
because of
this
lifestyle, most celebrities become addicted to alcohol or drugs, which
also
leads to an early death.
For example
, Machine Gun Kelly was addicted to alcohol and now is trying not to die because of it. In conclusion, I want to say that the
life
of celebrities is not easy, and they really pay with their health, and sometimes
life
for their popularity. We should not violate their personal space, because by doing
so we
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so, we
show our disrespect, but certainly not that we like them.

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