Your friend is celebrating her Birthday soon and has invited you to a party. But you are unable to come because you are going to attend an important meeting that day. Write a letter to your friend and * thank her for the invitation; * explain why you cannot come; * propose to meet on other day; Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mary,

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, I got your invitation yesterday from our friend Ahmed he was passing by, and he told me that you asked him to deliver your invitation to me. I would like to thank you for the invitation really thank you deeply from my
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. I guess you missed me as I do miss you.
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, I don’t know how to say it and how you will accept it, but
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I can’t come I’m very sorry because I have an important meeting with my boss
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work.
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, I have to drive my mother to her friend’s house.
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, I won’t include just an apology in the letter.
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week, I’m going to do a big party
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my home, and I will invite all our friends. You have to come because you are on the top of the guest list. It is a reunion party. I wish you all come! Thank you for reading my letter stay safe and positive. Love you! Waleed Alhebss
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