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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
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The table gives information in regard
witht
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with
 the forest area in millions of
hectares
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in
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 various continents in the world between 1990 and 2005.  
Overall
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, from 1990 to 2005, continents
such
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 as South America and Africa lose the greatest number of forested
hectares
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 worldwide,
while
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 Europe and Asia increased it. By 1990, South America counted
with
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946
million
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 of forested land, but in 2005,
this
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 figure decreased to only 64
million
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.
This
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 reduction was
also
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 presented in African territory where 60
million
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hectares
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 were cut down, reducing about 8
percent
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per cent
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 of the
country
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 forestation 
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,
during
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between
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 1990 and 2005, Europe increased 12
million
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 forested lands which
are
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the greatest number of
hectares
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 in the world.
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 Asia had lost 6
million
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 forested
hectares
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 by 2000,
this
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 continent increased significantly
this
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 number to 14
million
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 in the
next
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 five years. North America remained the same
sin
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in
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 2000 with 705
millions
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million
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of
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hectareas
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hectares
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hectares, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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