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It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society.

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Science and art are considered as the basic structure of our society.
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Thus, scientists
and artists contribute an essential role in our society.It is difficult to compare them.
However
, in my estimation artists contribute more to society.
Firstly
, when we examine the oldest societies we see the enchanting role of art in the development of people. To illustrate people who lived in the past communicate each other with the pictures they draw and
also
 there are a lot of historical artefacts we know about societies in ancient times.
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Moreover, most
of artists influenced the opinions of the public during their lifetime like Köroğlu, Firdevsi and Dostoyevski.
Besides
 today's artists
also
 contribute to people's lives in many ways, s
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to so extreme a degree
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heir feelings.
On the other hand
, scientists indicate their struggle to bring comfort to our lives. They found new products which are improving our quality life each day.
For example
, almost all huge machines to kitchen equipment that we use in our daily life.As technology advances, scientific developments began to affect people's lives negatively,
besides
 the contribution of scientists' people, they affected them badly.The invention of warplanes and nuclear weapons can be given as examples. In conclusion, artists and scientists have contributed to people throughout history but so from the above comparison, I thought that artists contribute more to people than scientists but as I mention that both are vital to us.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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