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Write a letter to your friend who you recently travelled with to a foreign country. Include Why you enjoyed the trip What you are doing now An invitation to visit you now

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Dear Lara, How are you? I hope
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 letter finds you well. I'm writing to thank you for being with me
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 our trip to Thailand
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 week. I really enjoyed the time we spent together after a long time because it feels like we went back to the old days when we were both young, wild, and free. I had a great time roaming around the city we are both unfamiliar with. You never changed a bit, you are still as adventurous and competitive as before! I'm so glad I get to explore the Thai culture and have tried their authentic classic dishes with you. It was indeed the most exciting holiday I've ever had! Thanks to our trip, I am now energized and motivated to do the project I was telling you about. Currently, I'm busy doing research about the reasons why Early Childhood Educators choose to work abroad. I will surely be moving around the clock for the
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 few days and I might be needing another short vacation after
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 September. That would be our school holiday and the weather would be perfect on those days. I'd love to tour you around and you can
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 bring your children with you. It'll be fun for all of us! I can't wait to hear from you. Best regards, Richelle

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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